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The wise, withered old block 🤣

The wise, withered old block 🤣

I need to give myself some wise advice, now that I am getting older

Coz this sixty one year old skin will be wrinklier in the eyes of that beholder

And I am also so well aware that when it is wintertime,  I am always feeling constantly that much colder

Nowadays I am sadly losing my confidence from being younger, carefree and boisterously bolder...

Now there may come a day when I have to stop what I am doing

And take a rest and relax instead of rushing around and viewing

I will have to hold on to my marvellous memories, not losing my marbles with them suddenly scattering and strewing

Oh isn’t this forever growing older just a nuisance of a nightmare with it’s pondering and problematic pursuing?...

Huh I look at Jill in that mirror on the wall

Now it’s not a case of ‘Silver threads among the gold’....coz alas sadly there is no gold left at all

And I can’t rush around like a whippet like I used to....Haha I have to take my time and crawl

God help me when I am ready for that knackers yard after stumbling with a fatal fall....

But there’s absolutely nothing that anyone can do about that tick tocking clock

Our timelessness of time is never gonna stop it’s turning and take a pause with a lock

And I can tell you speaking from experience when people say growing old gracefullt is great.... Huh that rubbish is just poppycock

I know what I am on about coz I am sixty one... heed my learning curve and take a tip from this wise, withered old block....

 

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Being Me

Love  this!  I can sooo relate to it. But you know what?  NEVER grow old gracefully! Never grow old! DENY it!!  Look in that mirror and accuse it of lying! That's what I do. Okay sometimes I get a blip when reality does one of those awful reset things, but I just do my best to fuck it all up as quickly as possible. Reality can be such a bitch!

So, Jill, deny it. Deny, deny, deny!  As Dylan once said (was it Dylan?) "Do not go gentle into that good night." No, dont! Put up a fight. Go kicking and screaming and remember...deny, deny, deny, deny, deny!!

😉  Brilliant poem! Very well written and extremely relatable. Go right to the top of the class young Jill x 

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Jill Tait

Pml@u I thought u were alot younger than me christ im almost a bloody fossil 🤣🤣🤣

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Being Me

Not a huge lot younger lol. In my 50s ...ahem, did I just say that?  I mean teens...(denial, see?).  And you are NOT anywhere near a fossil!  My goodness you have to really get into this denial business 🤣🤣🤣 x

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Jill Tait

Teehee luv I will try me toughest to stay forever young lol 🤣❤️💕🤣

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Greg Etsell

I to unerstand what you say bec i am 63 
every time i look at old photos of me 
of 30 years ago i want to cry but i dont
i have accepted how old i am and every now 
agin i have a senior moment and dont like when it
happens and there somethings i dont want to do
and something i cant do if know what mean we 
wont go in that now all in all i still love life 
and hope i live another 20 years and that my heath
will stay the same i will be 64 next year maybe 
i will write poem about it 

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Jill Tait

Awwww ay its funny but we all in similar age brackets xx

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Tony Taylor

I Too am your age.....and you know what.....I'm enjoying getting older.....things are slowing down and i'm enjoying the process.....I seem to get more enjoyment and comprehension out of the little things in life as well as facing my larger issues.....my dreams are more vivid than ever and I seem to remember more of them in the morning than I used to.......I take great pride at reminiscing over some of the amazing things I've done in this life........and I'm writing better than I ever have before......so although most of the comments on here profess the opposite.....I MUST speak my truth....and my truth is that growing older is quickly becoming the favorite part of my life thus far!!......Thank you JILL!!....for sharing this amazingly contagious piece of poetic prose!!......PINNED this one because of its truly inspiring aspect!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  : )

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Jill Tait

Awww thanking you kind sir 😍❤️💙❤️

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Jill Tait

Yes young at heart luv ❤️💕❤️

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