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Their hearts in ache.

He picked up her heart
Off the dirty floor where she left it

She didn't want it
anymore

She didn't stop
nor turn around
As she walked out the door

He stood there silent
Holding heartache
within his hands

No expression
Not even Trying
to understand

Just an empty space
within his mind,

He remembered
the love he gave
treated her unkind,

Was i blind he eventually said
Now love is gone

She is gone
I'm holding heartache
instead

He placed his heart
upon the floor
Next to hers

To ashamed
to keep it

He remembered
All the love she gave
In many ways she did adore

He placed his heart
upon the floor
Next to hers

To ashamed
to keep it

She was gone
And he could endure
No more

Left their hearts in ache
Upon the floor

And followed her out
The door.

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Tony Taylor

Hi Nardine!!......I really like this write........the repetition of some of the lines..........made me think of Edgar Allen Poe...........very cool ambiance to this.........loved the liquid flow here.........well done Big Sis!!........smiles..........T  xx

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Nardine Sanderson

Heya bro, thank you for the complements, you know i love Edgar Allan Poe, glad you liked this, love you heaps your sis nardine xoxo

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