Poem - 29 June 2014, 06:41 UP THERE. Nardine Sanderson Sitting between the hours night, Between mid, And morning light, Countless stars enlisted, Signatures' of existed , Moments rare, Cherish share, Memories everywhere. UP THERE Like 0 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 676 Rating: Total votes: 3 Tags: Memories Stars Poetry Genre: Freestyle 6 comments
Tony Taylor29 June 2014, 09:23 Hi Nardine, I liked the way the rhyme kept climbing to.....UP THERE....clever.........short and sweet.......tony xx Reply
Nardine Sanderson29 June 2014, 15:35 Dearest Tony thanks sweetie, I'm loving writing short poetry content, I'm glad you like this one hon, much love nardine xx Reply
Ravindra Kumar29 June 2014, 23:54 Brilliantly shadows on the great painful memories,....praiseworthy link...opening lines are really striking- "Sitting between the hours night, Between mid, And morning light, Countless stars enlisted, Signatures' of existed," Regards, Reply
Nardine Sanderson30 June 2014, 01:16 Thank you sweet ravindra, for your loving kindness to this write, much love to you nardine xx Reply
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Nardine,
Good write, My vote
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you sir williamsji xx much love nardine xx
Hi Nardine, I liked the way the rhyme kept climbing to.....UP THERE....clever.........short and sweet.......tony xx
Dearest Tony thanks sweetie, I'm loving writing short poetry content, I'm glad you like this one hon, much love nardine xx
Brilliantly shadows on the great painful memories,....praiseworthy link...opening lines are really striking-
"Sitting between the hours night,
Between mid,
And morning light,
Countless stars enlisted,
Signatures' of existed,"
Regards,
Thank you sweet ravindra, for your loving kindness to this write, much love to you nardine xx