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...THINKING OUT LOUD...

...THINKING OUT LOUD...

WHAT HAVE YOU DONE??

WHAT HAVE I BECOME??

HOW COME I DON'T  SPEAK??

WERE YOU THE FIRST TO LEAVE??

DO YOU STILL GO LEFT AND I GO RIGHT??

IS IT THE WAY YOU LEFT WITHOUT GOODBYE??

DO YOU REMEMBER THE STUFF WE USED TO SAY??

NO LONGER THE LOST,NO LONGER THE SAME??

WAS EVERYTHING JUST A BEAUTIFUL LIE??

DON'T YOU SEE THE WANDERING IN MY EYES??

WHERE DO I TURN NOW??

DO I JUST CRASH BACK INTO THE GROUND??

AT OUR SECRET PLACE WILL I SEE YOU THERE,SOMEDAY??

SOMEDAY,WILL YOU REMEMBER,MY FACE?? 

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sparrowsong

Hello Mayne...

Bazaar!

I had been working on a thinking out loud poem myself for about a week now...

It wasn't meant for me to do...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Delmayne Seekoei

hey sparrow I've been editing and editing but I think this one did the trick..thanx for your comment

mayne..::-))!!

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Delmayne Seekoei

hey pretty flower,thank you so much.. for that beautiful, heart stealing comment!!

much and much love for you pretty flower..:-))!!

mayne... 

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Nardine Sanderson

Love this Mayne, like a note from my book, hurt has grown a custom to my questions
Love you you sweetheart, nardine xox

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Delmayne Seekoei

LOL, SO GLAD  YOU ENJOYED IT.. NARDINE YOU ARE TOO KIND BUT I WON'T COMPLAIN GIRL..

MUCH LOVE FOR YOU TOO MY DEAR FRIEND..

MAYNE..:-))

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