Poem -
THIRD EYE BLIND
Tis not always easy to spot
Evil
Most times, it comes
disguised
In angel robes of pure white
Regardless though
It kills the light
Most times
We are unaware
Of the nastiness in
They
So fair
The poison buried deep within
A glowing pure lily skin
And most times
We allow them to kiss us
With a flattery intent
On milking us for their own
needs
These angels full
Of poison seeds
And innocents are most of we
Who look no deeper than we
see
Too late, we tangle in white
wings
To die within the softness of
their sins
Marion Price (2020)
(For lost friends who became entangled)
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love it ...lol
Hi Lorris...thanks so much ..hugs ?
Brilliant!!! Pinned ❤️?❤️
You are brilliant too..but I won't pin you...promise ????
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Hi Marion. A deep spiritual write. It's just lovely! Px?
Hi Pratibha...I wrote it because I observe so many seemingly lovely people in this world that are fake. They are always charming and draw people to them but can do so much damage ...narcissists and ( have I spelt that right ?)) and sociopaths are top heavy in this world, not easily spotted unless you have a third eye...thankyou love ?
Aawww it's good you have a third eye....to spot these unforgiving people. I agree there are some horrible people in the world too.
Px ?
I have developed 6 eyes over my lifetime...a seventh in reserve...lol..????
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I believe you!! Especially where you work!!
You know ...surprisingly no...people suffering MH are just souls going through a rough time...most evil is out there living normal lives Pratibha, normal, highly successful and very charismatic people...and seemingly as ordinary as you and me...beware!! ??
There is alot of people in this world that are not good people...agreed those that seem ordinary....otherwise there would not be so much negative news on tv.....people are not always kind, genuine and truthful. The ones you find that are - are the people to be around...and best to stay away from those that create a negative effect.
your 3rd eye term is very true here....we can figure the false and fakes out from the good and true.
I got the title from a band that I love ...I just said to Cherie I believe that our world is top heavy with people who.lack.true empathy but are extremely adept at faking it Prathiba, many of them rule us and many of them are out there in society, maybe living next door or a work.colleague or friend, they are hard to.spot untill.the damage has been done. Extremely clever people my friend....beware ???
Very poignant Marion -
at least we know that you're
someone we can trust. Lol.
Terry.
Love
X
Lol...thankyou Terry, appreciated, I love the band of the same name also ??
Wow... Marion...very clever writing. This is strong and the softness within the words make it doubly so. Very, very well done. I too know of people like this! People you think you can trust who turn out to be anything but trustworthy. People you think will never hurt you and yet they do. There are monsters around too, but at least with a monster you know what you are getting. Thank goodness there are truly lovely people around... The sort that put your faith back in humanity. We need those.
I am so sorry I missed this before now. I am doing a catch up on here today because I didn't have much time yesterday x
Hi Tina, sorry for late reply, thanks so much for your lovely comment my friend...hugs ?
Beautiful poem, Marion. I don't really know how to use pinning yet, but I did like it with five stars. My favorite line was the second to last, "too late, we tangle in white wings" -I'll be reading more.
Hi Stephen, I am honoured you have taken the time to read a previous work...truly. The pinning thing is just for us on Cosmo to have easy access to a poem we like. Once you press the pin you have your own collection of other people's work on your own page for browsing or sometimes it's just used as an expression of how much we rate a work...???