Poem -
THIS LITTLE HURT OF MINE
Do I cradle you?
Do I comfort you?
Do I find forgiveness because, you came back too soon?
Do I ask you to leave knowing you'll return one day?
Do I ask you to stay just so you don't get another chance to affect me this way?
Do I ask you for a little room for a little while?
I have many questions for you...
Take your time to answer because, I really want to know what's the best way to take care of this little hurt of mine...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
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Great piece?
Hello Silent Dreamer...
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sparrowsong
wonderful write
Genuine soul searching questions asked so poetically in superb emotional way they read awesome. I can relate to this sometimes. Kudos for this great poem!
Nice to read from u again,Β
pls Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too
Hello Edward...
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sparrowsong
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Always welcome sparrow .. I wana know what you think of β as the cellar door squeaksβ I wrote it simply around that phrase .. I wanted to use as much phonostetics as posible .. because thatβs were the phrase gets its fame I came across it in Donnie darko and thought it was wonderfull topic lol
Hello S.zaynab...
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sparrowsong
Sparrowsong,Β
No wonder you have 3 million followers, you're a beautiful writer. That was fantastic. Sad, longing, gorgeous.Β
Matthew.Β
I should have paid closer attention,
i should shun this lackadaisicalΒ
attitude. I came so close to missing this beautiful piece.
so intimate, such a gentle handling.
i will read many times!
john
Little Sparrow, such a touching write.Β
Hello Barry...
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Best wishes and blessings!
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sparrowsong
Hello Matthew...
3 million followers ????? you're hilarious!
Thank you for your very kind comment and support!
Best wishes and blessings!
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sparrowsong
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Hello John...
βββThank you for reading and for your very kind comment and generous support...
Stay Well!
Best wishes and blessings!
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sparrowsong
Hello Poettess...
Thank you for your very kind comment and generous support...
Thank you for reading...
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sparrowsong
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