Poem -
This World
As the sun sets...
And the fire in my soul withers away...
I look to myself and i say...
What was once will never be again...
And what will be can he halted by sin...
With the negativity of this world...
Crushing the spirits of this once little girl...
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Comments
Hello JonnyBoy...
I see a cartoon character getting flattened and gets up and puffs out back to normal...
The crushing may hurt, but you need the strength to puff...
Great write!Β
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongΒ
Thanks so much!
-JonnyBoy
beautiful write!
Thank you!
-JonnyBoy
Hello. I read your ink over and over again because there is so much in those few lines. It made me think of many things and registered in my emotions. I see the destruction of Mother Earth, the death of a father or a mentor, the waging of war and the people it effects. Some really deep stuff here. Well done. :) Rebecca
I appreciate the kind words!
-JonnyBoy