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Those two tiny voices ??

Those two tiny voices ??

Every now and then there lurks a thing inside of me that raises an awareness of negativity
but I try to pull the wool over it’s ugly eyes to think that’s it’s foolish and only telling me lies
Yet this thing is persistent and it is very strong making me doubt my positivity and my sense of belong

Niggling doubts inside my mind that do their utmost to doom the good vibes that I find
A black-out curtain I have to undraw to rid the fear inside that dreadful door
Whether I am right or whether I am wrong that doom and gloom will tag along
My mental state of possibilities is thrown into an oblivion of anxieties

Those two tiny voices either side of our head that guides us through the paths we have to tread
So I need to choose in the blink of an eye which is the one that is telling me a lie
One’s daily decisions we have to make with nobody’s guideance but our own namesake
 

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Pratibha Savani

I love it!! Ying and Yang / good and bad!! Beautifully written and flows wonderfully xxx
Liked pinned and ⭐ !!

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Jill Tait

Awww again Thanking you kindly my friend ???

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Katina Woodruff...

Hi Jill, another fantastic poem! 

I liked the compare and contrast of negative/positive thoughts. I like that there is a subtle message about being reeled into our negative thought processes, and how we can stop this cycle by thinking more positively.  

Favorite part: 

A black-out curtain I have to undraw to rid the fear inside that dreadful door

I like the reference to the, 'black-out curtain,' it's like we are hiding under a cover during days of disparity and revealed un hidden on days we are feeling positive. The reference to the door is also appealing -- like, a door to escape those negative feelings and thoughts of doom. The door is an opening -- a positive passage to safety of the bad feelings. 

Good work Jill. 
Hope you are staying busy during this time. 

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Jill Tait

Aww Thanks luv yes we are just isolating and daily walks xxx❤️❤️❤️

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