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Thoughts of you

Thoughts of you

As I lay melancholy on my lonely bed with only my thoughts of you spinning in my head . lost in my moments of mindlessness, longing to feel your tenderness . and I wonder do you ever think of me? or am I only wishing for what will never be . yet I cannot get you out of my head in this empty bed
 
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So speak to me now from out of the blue coz I know that you could if you wanted to, just pick up your phone and give me a call to tell me you miss me and your sorry for it all..

The last time I saw you we had a disagree in a heated moment of madness and uncertainty . but time has moved on and passed us by, with only my heartache that’s making me cry . do you feel the same? coz I’d like to know, did you want to take back those words of woe . can we carry on and put away our pride, my sadness is tearing me up inside..

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So speak to me now...

I will think of us together for evermore with the places we travelled  on our explore , so many memories are in my heart . you made my life complete right from the very start . those times when we stood out ages in the rain let’s not let our happiness all be in vain . yes it is true that all I do ever is to spend every minute with my thoughts of you.,

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Greg Etsell

wow wow wow!!!!! what poem
a masterpiece wow 

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Jill Tait

Its a song i wrote this morn in my bed luv xxx so pleased u like it ❤️💙❤️

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Katina Woodruff...

Good morning Jill, so glad I found your poem today. There is always rhythm in your narrative poems. I could hear the rhymes glide precariously from line to line. Another good write. It's a song, correct? Well done. I think this is the first song lyrics I've read by you. Again, great work here!

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Jill Tait

Yes thanks luv iv wrote bout 40 songs haha they come into my head when walking or dtiving lol but its all good fun 💕💕💕

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A Lonely Journey

Jillicious, 
OMG, you amaze me! Now you're writing songs, and beautiful ones at that. 
Truly heartbreaking, and wonderful. I wish I could write the music for it. 

Great job! 

Matthew. 

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Jill Tait

I wrote that this mornin n wrote Bittersweet memories yesterday when driving back from a jaunt lol both sound so different lol haha got 40 + songs now all totally different tho but only with my voice alas I cant play an instrument :( worst luck xxx

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Jill Tait

Haha i have music but just me singing it lol got 40 summit songs all just with my voice xxx🤣❤️😆❤️

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A Lonely Journey

Awesome! I'm not sure what that means, but it sounds great! 
I have mucus, but I'm thinking of purchasing a decongestant. What do you think? 
M. 

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Jill Tait

Haha what word have I used lol to confuse you xx

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A Lonely Journey

Hi Jillian, 
What are summit songs? (Don't worry, it's not you, I just don't understand words. If you wrote me in numbers, I would completely get it. Like, if you said 'Matt, 4 times the relative quotient of 18, divide by the tranverse, obtuse angle of 74 degrees, equals eleven' I would know that you were saying 'Matt, you're an idiot' and I would be ingratiated, but words I don't know. Does that make sense? Good, because I have no idea what I'm talking about. 
Cheerio!(do you guys say that?). 

Matthew. 

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Jill Tait

Ahhh summit = something matey xxx

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A Lonely Journey

Oh, lol!! I'm the worst at deciphering Northumbreland dialect. I feel as though I should be British on here, as I think there may be a great deal of people from there on here. Which is OK(I love British accents, and people and Loch Ness monsters), but I'm more of a coffee person, rather than tea. Does that make sense. Please advise. Thanks. 
M. 

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Jill Tait

Mmmm nope coz I love both haha 🤣❤️💙

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Cherie Leigh

Hi Jill...I love this!  I wish I could hear the tune!  I think that is so cool that you write songs too!  You are one talented and creative lady!  Had to pin this...You are just so charming....and this song is so relatable to many in its wistful theme.  xo Love n Hugs

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A Lonely Journey

Interjection: 
OK, Jillian, get the song posted on here so we can hear it. No, is not an option. Sing, little bird, sing! 
Over. 
M. 

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Jill Tait

I dont know how to send it on here lol 

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Jill Tait

Send me your email but my voice is useless n you need to imagine another singer lol not me haha  

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Jill Tait

Haha I have sound that I can send but haha Id be embarrassed as my voice is rubbish!!! I’ve over 40 songs now lol all saved on my voice memo app on my phone xx

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