Thoughts Through Garden's Glittering
My thoughts penetrate the maze
Circling back through hedges lovely green
Etched into silvery trees, their mistress' name
Such sacred mezzotint so rarely seen
Easily decorating my glittering solitude
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Like this, no white nor yellow was ever seen
And so I consider good fortune's divine sanction
Here where Paladin powers golden gleam
Appear as the attenuated seeds of procreation
So gracefully decorating this garden's pulchritude
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Not even aware of how I dropped anchor here
My thoughts flow through a lattice of crystallography
This glistening garden, empties me of fear
And I dive through my mind's new found topography
While mindfully decorating new ideas with exactitude
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As the veil is lifted from heavy eyes
I am left wondering, was it all just the vernal sunshine
Creating visions in this oasis of sweet surprises
Or am I just a dreamer down deep inside
Haphazardly decorating my own glittering solitude..
Tony Taylor
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Comments
lovely images.
whether it is the garden or your imagination,it takes poetic eyes to see in that light
Thanx SARAH!!...I Love your comment......' poetic eyes..'...... love to you & yours!!..... smiles......T xo ??❤?
What sometimes seems real becomes a mere vision of our mind but what is the mind but the creator of such beautiful matter. Wonderful poem Tony.
Thanx for reading and commenting GERARD!!..... it is ALWAYS a pleasure to hear from you...... your insights are VERY much appreciated...... you see straight into the heart of the matter!!...... stay groovy my friend!!...... Kings to you!!......T xo ❤
if I am ever looking for serenity or somewhere to do a little mindfulness then the garden is my Oasis! You have painted a wonderful picture of a wonderful, meandering journey through your mind and garden..just beautiful Tony! loved this xx
Lodigiana
Thanx so much LO!!!.....I can see you in a garden of light..... pen and paper in hand........ you're one of my favorite creators...... and environment always helps!!......thanx again girlfriend!!...... smiles.....T xo ??❤
First of All brother I am so sorry it has been so long since I have had time to read your beautiful poetry. I have been caught up with trying to start my firm. Love this poem, it is as eloquent as you are.
Hey GREG!!..... It's all good my friend..... congrats on getting your business going!!...... gotta have sustenance right!!.... work it!... own it!!... work it!..... own it!!..... smiles.......thanx so much for this bro!!...... good to see you on the pages.....TTYL!!......T xo ??❤✌
Sir Tony..
After a long day at work I am so happy that I got the chance to visit this beautiful garden of yours..
My mind is satisfied..
thanks brother for sharing..
This one I have Pinned!
Thanx so much SIR BARKER!!...... glad this take away from some the angst of the day..... smiles...... stay groovy my friend!!....??✴✴?
Very thought provoking Tony, magical and yet tones of loneliness, a paradise or a dream....love your writes. Pinned for further thought xxxxx ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thank you LUCY!!..... always a pleasure girlfriend...... you hit the nail on the head!!...... been missing you around here!!......T xo ???❤
Never a "glance Poet" Be prepared to be immersed, tantalized and mesmerized, when wandering through a write of Tony's.
As always colorful imagery. poet flow. Great write!
John
Hey JOHN!!..... so good to hear from you my friend..... hope all is well in DeFoore-land!!.......thanx so much for the kind words!!...... Kings to you!!.....T xo ??✴❤
Wow, Tony.
Such extensive vocabulary on display here.
In order to be a master of the English language one must possess a well-oiled and comprehensive vocabulary.
No doubt about it.
Words such as mezzotint, attenuated, pulchritude, crystallography, topography, exactitude, and vernal all used basically to describe a beautiful glistening garden paradise.
Nicely penned!
~Dean ✯✯✯✯✯
Thank you DEAN!!..... when you read a lot of poetry most of those are words are a must-know......I had to seek out the words Mezzotint & Crystallography because in the first version of this piece the details were more intricate...... but ~ " Writing is re-writing"......thanx again for noticing the details dear poet brother!!......Kings to you!!.....T xo ??✴✴?✴✴❤
Dear Tony,
In the sanctum of his garden
He escapes from all Mankind
To contemplate what life is
And inner peace to find
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The trees and budding flowers
Sway gently in the breeze
He breathes in of their beauty
As he drops down to his knees
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He thanks the Lord for leading him
Back to Eden once again
Where now he finds total love and repentance
Forever there to spend
Love you Bro,
Larry xxx
Dear Poet Brother LARRY!!
Many thanks for the 'most poetic' comment......your eyes and your heart ever-comprehending the soul of the subject matter......I am such a fortunate writer to have a friend, a poet, such as you sending kind understanding through the screen, into my life and my work!!......Thanx again!!.......T xo ❤
Dear Tony,
As I am so fortunate to have you in my life, a true gift from Heaven. From the first day we met on Cosmo, you have inspired me with your words of wisdom. I look so forward to that day when we meet in person.
Love you Bro,
Larry xxx