Thread of existence
Like 2 Pin it 0We are upon the thread of existence
By this thread we dangle
Breathing only just
As the moisture from our breath
Slowly decreases,
Laying upon our backs
Looking upwards towards the blue sky
Looking for heaven
For signs of hope
Waiting;
Yet the snake is drawing closer
Spitting danger,
O Lord we are dying
By this very thread
Until no breath no more
~~~
Upon this bed of pain we fight
We fight and we fight
And we fight
Until there is completely
No breath
Laying there in this tomb
This cave of bats
Attacking and unforgiving
They are coming for us
In their Trojan horses
Secretly and undeniably
They are coming
With their swords and their axes
Inevitably
They are coming
Hide
~~~~~
They are here
Be quiet now
Lay silent beneath this bed
I can hear their boots
Their stomps and
RAGE
They are looking
We are not breathing now
We are not even in here now
Quiet; becoming angrier
They are becoming angrier
Soon they will leave
And if they do not find us
We shall be
By this thread their own
Ghost
~~~~~
Threads of existence
Truth on earth unto death
For the evil that breathes
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My Dear Poetic Brother, Jai,
The serpent is upon us, but the charmers of the snakes are being sent from the Heavens to lull them into a false sense of security. As the stealthy mongooses sneak up and snap their necks, rest assured these vampires will never taste fully of our blood, and will perish with starvation. We will be ready this time for the "Greeks Bearing Gifts", and as they climb confidently down, we will slay them with every first step. So, all ye, all ye, in come free, for the Lord sends his executioners, to save humanity and turn these "Threads of Existence" into "Spools of Serenity".
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
I hope so Larry; I truly do;
thank you. Your reply is poignant and
brings light; like a Diwali or Hanukak
and the tree of Christmas. :)
LuV from Jai:)
wow, Jai, this poems is somewhere between a really bad acid trip and sheer brilliance, I suspect you had a rough time finding the words (on the option list) to describe this one, the image you used says a lot about the tone and content of this write.... anyway, it's really good in it's own unique way, you will never disappoint the reader good sir, hope you are well, hugs
Can I meet you Chris, you are a great
review for a poor poet,
i just write and hope it goes ok
then I think why write,
do you know why we write poetry?
thank yuuuuuuu Chris.
good question, my brother....personally I write poetry to allow my pen to ejaculate words on paper, lol (to quote a phrase from my friend) okay the real reason is because I'm a Narcissistic delusional dumb ass who is convinced that nobody in this whole freaking world can come up with, and speak the things I speak of, as good as I can speak them. ....now there, that is the 'real' reason I write poetry, what about you, brother Jai? I'll check on your answer tomorrow, have great evening
awesome imagery, super flow and a little craziness too!
These noodles I eat are tasty
To the PoetessDarkly
I say fondly,
It's all murky
thank you for coming by
&
Luv from Jai:)
Well before I die I may as well write my thoughts
we all die sooner or later so poetry says its well.
i ink :) there I am.
LuV u Chris in the
non seXy Microbikin way