Poem -
" THREE TO FLY...."
Bending low, gaining speed
Of the ramp, through the air
Those below, taking heed
Hitting snow, feelings rare
Through the air ~ free of care....
Helmet on, green light flash
Into space, bird without wings
Piercing clouds, ripping cord
Calm exhilaration brings,
Through the air ~ free of care...
Across the roof, on the edge
Windy day, looking down
Trees below, on the edge
Decisions made, reach for ground
Through the air ~ free of care...
Tony Taylor. (Chicago)
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Hi Tony, sad lovely write. "Through the air ~ free of care". Cheers.
Thanx so much CLEO!!........ always a pleasure sister girl!!.......... Love and Rockets!!.......T xo
Your creativity never ceases to amaze me no matter the subject topic 5* brother
Thank you CO!!........... I'm ALWAYS happy to see your ink on my page bro!.......... respect your opinion!!............ Love and Rockets!!.............T xo
Great structure to an incredibly well written work.
Best wishes to you.
:)
Thanx so much SIR WATERS!!!.......... appreciate the ink bro!!............ Best wishes back at ya!!......... smiles!..........T xo
HI Tony You have the ability to write about anything
this is awesome as always
Enjoyed Lots.. Debs xo
OOOPS.... .Tony I read your poem and just glanced quickly at the picture.
I thought when i read it, it was about free running, then read Lily`s comment
My comment still stands though ,you can write about anything it is awesome
Enjoyed a poem about suicide is wrong though, so i`ll say very creative write
high fives from me Debs xo
Thanx DEBS!!..... glad you caught that......... it's about a ski jumper, sky diver, and a suicide attempt....... an old piece that I re-worked.......... so happy that you enjoyed it!!..........I was little worried when I first posted it....... difficult subject matter..........thanx again D!!..........Love and Rockets!!......T xo
Hey t three to fly is no way to die. Some may think it is the easy way out but trust in God because His light duth shine ever so bright . A great right , great rhyming .cheers rock
Thanx ROCK!!.........I agree........it's definitely no way to die!!............thanx for this!!..........Love and Rockets!!..........T xo
You have a way with words my dear friend. I love everything you post
My mind liked it; you are saying something
to us the reader in a bewildering styלe
good job poet TT!! Luv Jai :)