Threshold-throat

I hung out
my sore slough
in our wet garden
- a gore puddle under it
rapidly formed -
My threshold-throat tries
to utter your name
in a desperate silent gust.
Your glossy dark eyes
staring at me,
astonished at the same attempt.
And the gossamer-cloud
finally encases our silent house.
And it rains
on our sore gore
And it pours
on our scattered bones.
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Chillingly evocative; the imagery, at turns, nightmarish and domestic.
The playful use of words seems somewhat out of place; given the central image coming slowly into focus: and yet utterly apt and most certainly compelling.
Wonderful!
J ;)
Thank you !!! :)