THYROID PANZER

the oil in the lamp is dreaming of a flask of star garments
draped over succulent blue where the pink is bright green.
crass haloes melting in sterling eggshells
and dusted with cardamom and lost socks.
the soft spots of the world, all dreamt by flame
sleeping in a viscous pool of itself.
swinging from a brace link
in a fable.
the cracked pot in the corner is dancing.
while disable.d.

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Comments
Interesting poem.
Have you considered expanding the poem to give more specific details about the piece? I would add at least one paragraph that details the story more. Other than that, great job!
Favorite part:
Heh..heh... the " grammatical anomaly at the end is intentional.
Thank you. I wasn't sure if it was intentional. Good work. :)