Time stood still
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Miraculously my minutes momentarily stood still
As shooting stars shrouded my senses from the fascination of the thrill
Yet my incident did not kill me Oh no that was not the Lordβs will
So I stand to see another day reminscing that horrendous hill
You see it happened on a Monday morning, yes I can remember it so well
I was on my way to see my MotherΒ
The roads were as icy as hell
But being me with my determinationΒ
I would not be told
βHuh itβs a bit frost rind, Iβll wrap up and face the coldβ
Of course I should have heeded my wise husbandβs advice
As I put my foot on the breaksΒ Β my wheels skidded on the ice
I had just turned this junction at the top of an embankment
I lost control in my little red car and felt the fear of disenchantment
Zig-zagging for what seemed like ages I slithered down the hill
But I pumped my break in stages as timelessness stood still
Then a wagon driver who was right in front of me opened my car door and set me free
I was routed to the spot until he woke me from my reverie
That scarey skid many moons ago still haunts me
So it is very true what they say about a chaotic commotion
Your whole world stands still in a sudden slow motion
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Aww I am walking head in phone haha well that is true story n learned me lesson with driving in frost xxx
great poem com read my poem on time
Im out walking n on 3 rd poem lol ok will do now xx
Another well written poem. Of course, you always pen something unique.Β
I remember sliding on black ice, in order to miss a recently stopped school bus from, I turned my wheel in the direction of the skid and I went right into a ditch. Thankfully, all the kids on the bus were spared and the accident was mine to acknowledge and pay for. :)Β
Good work Jill.Β
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Awww isnβt it so scarey I always recall that monday morning skid!!! β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Pml ay im on bloody fire fetch me a flamin hose ??β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ