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Timeless View

Timeless View

Windows into the soul, a timeless view,
Look into her eye and see auras new!
See the living waters of Savior fame!
Truth reflected from His powerful name!

Journey through time; with spirits divine!
Follow their path to the nursery sublime!
Discover lost lives and worlds without end!
Forever families, and a forever friend.

What you seek will suddenly be revealed!
All your mistakes forgotten, thus repealed.
A sight of great worth to cherish and behold!
Sacred place; where only truth can be told.

Windows into the soul, a timeless view!
Look into her eye, witness all things new!

 

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Jill Tait

Oooh I love thisun & that timeless view is a brilliant concept....through the eagle eyes of an Owl 💕❤️💕⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Tony Taylor

Wow JIM!!.....this is SO creative....and such a VERY well crafted Sonnet.....that it takes you away into its otherworldliness with ease and grace.....and makes it quite easy to believe in the possibilities suggested in this most CREATIVE piece of poetic, paranormal, potential!!......ALL STARS & PINNED!!.......Bravo!!......Love it brother!!......Peace......T xo  : )

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Twistoftroy

Love how the words are well crafted into the imagery, exactly how I connect to words. Beautiful.

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Jim "The Lad" ....

to all the new members ! hope you will participate in commenting on each others writes and you can vote by clicking a star! It would be nice to see interaction as well ! Welcome to Cosmo!.................Jim

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Shaun Cronick

Jim , so very well said and beautifully well written. A poem with a clear message and one I wholeheartedly agree with.
I forget myself sometimes just how rewarding this site and its incredible members are in delivering great poetry in their own way.
Their own unique poetic way.
So many poems to add rainbow colour and sustenance food for thought to one's  soul. 
And yours especially to guide and not forget our spiritual place among others.
Thanks for writing and sharing my friend and five stars and kudos to you Jim.

 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Your kind words are motivation to continue writing and your assessment of food for thought from writers here is "right on" ! with a highlight on yours ! thank you!

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Pratibha Savani

I love this Jim. Just sheer brilliance! Ssoo pinned!! Px

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Jim "The Lad" ....

sheer gratitude, Pratibha! thank you for reading and your humbling comments.

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