Titanic disaster
This ship is so amazing
This ship is so grand
I can't wait to begin
The voyage that's been planned
I can't believe I'm on here
Blimey who would think
We are on the biggest ship
That's said it cannot sink
The first few days were amazing
And like a dream come true
So much to see and do
A sea so beautifully blue
But tonight we hit danger
A big iceberg has been hit
The corridors are dark now
That earlier were lit
The water is coming in now
I'm beginning to feel scared
No one seems to be about ,
Who is going to hear me shout
We are only third class
We seem to be sinking fast
How long will we take to sink
The titanic isn't going to last
The waters getting freezing now
I know I'm going to die
All I can think is
This is so unfair and why ?
Bodies are floating past me
They just couldn't take the cold
From small tiny children
To people who were quite old
I am really cold now
I can't take it anymore
Titanic was a disaster
A story told forever more
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Comments
Good write Sarah from the perspective of a third class traveler upon such a legendary ship. What a tragedy not to put enough lifeboats because of such immense egos believing the ship was unsinkable. Well done allstars
Thanks very much :)
Truly horrific disaster and one that hopefully will be a one off x
Hj Sarah . A great write . Enjoyed a lot . You should check out my poem on titanic too . Cheers hrl
Hiya hard rock lover thanks very much what it's called I looked at all your titles but couldn't decide which was titanic one x
Hi Sarah it is called why rose let jack go
Life occurs in the eyes of mortals like the Titanic, a trip on a large ship where there are first, second and third class cabins. A very safe boat capable of solving any problem until one day suddenly makes KRAK and splits, begins to make water and sinking in the sea. Greetings, the poem seems witty, a description of the sinking of the Titanic written in first person seems a great idea.