Poem -

To my daughter

I'm going to move on

Am I meant to ignore the arrows that pierce me or the spit that lands in my face. Why should I brush off your words that abuse me or the lies that take loves place.
 
I am broken and bleeding, you're the cause of this feeling and I just won't do this no more. You wake with agenda at your family who get ya who only have your best interest for sure.
 
I hope you are happy with the decisions you've made, you won't get to do them again. I release you from pretending you love or you care, go get lost in yourself
 
                       The end x
 

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Tony Taylor

MEL!! ~ this is so sad.... one of the saddest pieces of poetic prose I've read here....... your daughter!?....... wow!!..... My mother and I have had MAJOR trials and tribulations throughout our crazy relationship...... at one point, we didn't talk to one another for 13 years......I regret it now.... but then I thought I was doing the right thing....... we only get ONE family...... and what I've found is that forgiveness (no matter what) ultimately works...... we don't always see it and for some they never get to see the results of just how powerful forgiveness can be....... and I know in some cases people cannot be saved from themselves...... but death has a way being the 'great equalizer' and we ALL have to face that day....... and when it comes and is gone....... don't we want our family to know we love them?......I don't know why I'm rambling on here....... it's just that my mother and I speak now..... and it's not always good...... but we do acknowledge one another's right to be ourselves.... and Man-Oh-Man did that take some work!!..... anyway, apologies for draping this all on your poem...... but it touched a cord in me....... so thank you for that...... and for sharing this honest truth with us all!!........ALL STARS!!...... and..... in case no one has said so........WELCOME to COSMO!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.........T xo.  :)

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