Together as one
Entwined and bound
is this relationship
weaving strands
without tying knots
each band interlacing
forming a unified strength
one cannot be without other.
every structured twist
shapes interlocking kiss
touching lips
pressing faces together
tightly no gaps between
yet breath can gain air
harmoniously knitted
enhancing each others
paths in close conection
one guiding the other
existing as one form
lapping to make a circle
platted intermittently
bending with the flow
in this relationship
nothing is hid
inside is open
outside is on show
there are no corners
to delve in deep
peep and seek
ours is an open plan
bearing all
Existing as one form
interrelating together
we have evolved into
a basket of love
a matted womb presented
ready to receive and bear fruits
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This is a really clever, free flowing, well expressed poem of togetherness. There are some lines in this Undefined Warrior which I loved, in fact I was going to choose an example but then I struggled to find my favourite. The more you read this poem the better it gets, and the more I realise just how clever it is, all the way up to the final line. 5*s and nom from me :)
Thank you for your kind offering, I am happy that it has inspired you...
Your sincere comments are also very inspirational to me,
for your sentiments leap of the page and touch me.
ONCE AGAIN thank you Rachel.....