Hello Yasmin Smith!!........you've got a lovely timbre with your repetition here...........and the lingering question that you leave your reader with is indeed.........Compelling............excellent rhythm and timing my friend.........well done........and........WELCOME to COSMO!!...........smiles.........T xo
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Hi Yasmin Smith,
Welcome to CSOMOFUNNEL, this is an amazing poetry fun site, welcome
Simple write, thanks for sharing
Love & Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hello Yasmin Smith!!........you've got a lovely timbre with your repetition here...........and the lingering question that you leave your reader with is indeed.........Compelling............excellent rhythm and timing my friend.........well done........and........WELCOME to COSMO!!...........smiles.........T xo
Many thanks for the lovely comment.