Tony & Cherie Co-Write ~ Wedding Night's Approval
Wedding Night's Approval
In the wedding night
Stars shine through the roof
Living proof that love takes
A glistening view
To questions answered
And unanswered true
Our vows, much like a wishing well
Run deep with promise
As stars up in the veil of our future
Are simple dreams that dream
Of two becoming one in all ways
Like destined ships finding safe harbor
Like childhood friends
With naïve kisses that borrow
A glimpse of passion with innocent eyes
Yet holding the wisdom of forever
Where time tells of proof through the roof
As we lie here together
Sojourning souls lost in twilight's wonder
Finding faith,
Gazing,
At the night sky's,
Approval....
Tony Taylor & Cherie Sumner
* last night, alternating every two lines
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Last night on the back porch, a warm evening, Cherie and I created this in 45 minutes and were disappointed not be able to find the perfect picture to accompany what we had in our minds eye!!........ but it was a lot of fun daydreaming and creating!!...... smiles.......T & C !! ❤ ? ? ?
you guys should have taken a selfie....that would have been cool.
Whst a lovely poem , so beautiful that you wrote it together.
John
❤️❤️❤️❤️ No words
Thank you MIKAYLA!!......❤ back at ya dear poet sister!!...... smiles.....T xo ??
This is a pure elegant love, oh how I want a porch to dream on, brilliant Tony and Cherie, love it... ??
Hey WAYNE!!..... the porch is available for collaborators anytime...... please text before you come!!.....smiles......thanx for this my friend!!......T xo ???✴❤?
??? depending on the traffic my ice cream may melt, I'll have to think of a different dessert to bring, a one that will last a flight ???☮? brother! ???
wounderful!!!!!!
Thank you GREG!!!....I feel "Wonderful!!"..... much appreciated my friend..... smiles....T xo ??❤
You are very welcome I bless you both and hope you have great life together and when you get married I hope you video tape it and put on cosmos so the world can see love you both
A true, heartfelt poetic proclamation of love.
Collaborating with someone on a poem isn't as easy as many might think.
Firstly, each contributor needs to say what they need to say while complimenting the thoughts expressed by the other.
But you've both come up with a poem that reads very fluidly–as if the both of you were of one mind.
And that's really what love is all about, is it not–two becoming one?
Exceptional,
~Dean ღ
My pleasure. Best of luck to you both.
~Dean ツ
Thanx SO much DEAN!!....It's true my friend.....it was very much like being of one mind as we were writing this......a beautiful experience..,,,thanx for reading and commenting my fiend......apologies for the late reply!!......smiles....T xo ❤
Two voices flowing together as one. Utterly beautiful
Thanx SIR NIGEL!!.....a pleasure my friend.....truly......smiles.....T xo ❤
Awesome work from an awesome couple
May your love continue to grow
Thanx KIERAN!!.....I very much appreciate the kind words my friend....apologies for the late reply!!.....Much Love to you & yours!!.......smiles....T xo ❤
Conjoined minds,conjoined spirits and conjoined souls.. you guys are magical together!!! This is a beautiful piece with says so much about your feelings for the present and your future together..loving it! Pinned to fill me with future optimism my friends! You two love birds always make my heart fly a little higher ..bless you both!
Lodigiana x
Hey, Thanx LO!!......such a beautiful comment.....it is VERY much appreciated and I think I can speak for the both of us when I say ~ Thank you for the PIN for reasons of future reading.....it's an honor my friend ....we both continue to look forward to your comments....they're ALWAYS upliftingly gracious!!......hugs-n-smiles!!.....your friend and admirer!!.....T xo ??✴❤ ✴?
Great collaboration/// two souls united... as the saying goes: two heads are better than one... you'll entice more readers to visit Cosmofunnel..
hugs
Thank you LEAH!!.....I hadn't thought of that but you make a VERY interesting point there.....if it does entice more readers....that would be fantastic!!.....much love to you and yours dear poet sister!!......smiles....T xo ???✴✴❤✴?
lovely co-writes so romantic :)
thank you for reading UYIME!!.....so very kind of you to comment too!!...it is VERY much appreciated!!......smiles.....T xo ???✴❤✴?
Our Dear Cherie and Tony,
This amazing work, is the lovely product of two unbelievably creative minds, bound together by two starstruck Souls.
A star's light takes over two thousand years
To reach our planet Earth
The prophecy of millenniums
This love that's given birth
.
These Soulmates reunited
As together, they've been before
With the Universe's approval
To be in love for evermore
All our love to you both,
Linda and Larry xxx
A beautiful write! Truly shows unity throughout, two voices become one of love. What is impressive is the flow represents and reflects the relationship you two have and im glad I was able to crawl out of my writer's basement to witness plus you got Cherie to do a co-write....awesome. Hope your both well will touch base with you soon. Much love and peace.