Poem -
Too young to die
God where are you
My friend is dying
Just a child really
With cancer she lays
Nausea day in and out
Tears on hospital floors
Pain in the corridors
Anguish on the dad's face
Sisters wondering when,
When their sister will die?
Mum asks why,
Why my child God, why!
Why must a beautiful child die
She is far too young
O God I am going through
The 6 stages of grief at once
And my heart is broken
Truly we are dying with our child
This day, September 17, 2002
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Such a sad story Jai well conveyed!! A very poignant last line! :)
thanks Rachel pity is true,
life very harsh sometimes
hearts can break everywhere...
Cannot imagine ever seeing your child suffer in that way, let alone losing them, heartbreaking Jai :)
Wow such a beautiful story. Your emotions are so nicely expressed....
AG
Ariadnee thanks for a super
Comment
for positivity rebuffs negativity and
grace deletes the devil;
best wishes to you;
live and let live:) Jai
children like i have said have strength and acceptance more than adults can and its those two things when a child dies are remembered about them .my friends child age 6 died with cancer too but even near the end she had the strong will to accept. that childs power of acceptance will live on in you :) tina x
I know you are correct about this
thank you!
I am so sorry for you to experience such a sad and frustrating event! I lost my favorite childhood friend in a similar fashion. I understand how hard it is to have to watch.
your thoughts go to my heart
for a nice comment of compassion is
soul food
thanks!!
this is such a beautiful poem so sorry for your loss i hear your pain lost my son this past may ..
Thank you really appreciate it.. The pain is endless but lord knows he is in a better place far more beautiful far more safe now he can fly with other angels with grace ..
sad but lovely write hugs congrats x
Thanks Susan, :( sad when I hear
of tragedy: I am looking for a good news
story...
I love it its so sad I know the feeling and it is heart breaking=( I love all your poems I'm just starting to write I known I could write but just getting better.
Sorry I meant I love all your poems.
practice the art of writing Heidi and if will flow
like water...
i will check out your poetry now I meet you
Thank you for your gracious kind comments
kind rgs Jai :)
thanks I just wrote a new poem its called missing pieces
Michael may your nephew be helped rather than hindered by the illness and he is fortunate to have you there!! Thank you for comments and good thoughts!
Best from
Jai :)