Poem - 31 May 2019, 14:11

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Syd

Pushing luck
And ignorance
Right to the hilt...

I hide my wifes empty bottle with disgust.
Like a cat burrying shit.

Potions and chemicals
Help me forget...

The tracking's off
The tape is twisted
Please press EJECT

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ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐03 June 2019, 16:50

Beautifully written piece Syd

Syd09 June 2019, 03:56

Thank you Lisa. I'll do my best to catch up on other Cosmofunnel members work and leave feedback. Apologies for the late reply.

- Syd

Valerie Beasley...03 June 2019, 18:55

Wow!!! Powerful and uniquely descriptive write! Well done!
val

Syd09 June 2019, 03:57

Thank you for your kind comment Valerie. Apologies for the late reply.

- Syd

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