Poem -
Touch
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When you touch;
it rains inside;
as much
as not enough
for the Earth to be
more wet;
frozen and timid !
when you kiss;
it pours as bliss,
as such
as not enough
for the sea to be
more wild;
cold; bold !
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BY
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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Comments
Beautiful write sir williamsji xx much love to you, nardine xx
Dear Nardine,
Thanks for your comments and appreciation of my above verse.
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
A lovely romantic piece S W. I enjoyed reading it. Well done for a beautiful piece. Love to you. G xx
Dear Georgina,
Thanks for you love and appreciation of my verse.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
You had me from the first two lines; When you touch,
It rains inside...............I love that image.......very romantic write....loved it.....tony
Dear Tony Taylor,
Many thanks for your lovely comments and appreciation of my verse. Love to you.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Cherie,
Many thanks for your short review of my sensual poem. Much appreciated
Love, regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI