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Transience (Dblankportrait's 15 word challenge)

Transience (Dblankportrait's 15 word challenge)

         Transient memories

soaring through my mind 

         resisting, evading my grasp 

not yet wishing for discovery. 

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Lily Cas

Thank you! It was a nice change to my usual works :) 

xxxLily 

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Jason Brown

You find that when you restrict yourself within a particular form, it forces you to find a more crystalline mode of expression. The technical demands of an exacting meter, rhyme or other constriction actually frees you from free verse...conversely!!

A fact most delightfully demonstrated here by your good self. So, well done.

J x 

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Lily Cas

Thank you! I really enjoyed writing it. It's a huge change for me and it was a lot of fun. I might just write a few more! Thank you for this challenge :) 

xxxLily 

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Mizzy ......

There's a deep sense of mystery ànd intrigue to your 15 Lily.

Really enjoyed......Mick.

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Lily Cas

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed! I wound up writing a second part to it :) 

xxxLily 

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