Transience (All Parts)
Transient memories
soaring through my mind
resisting, evading my grasp
not yet wishing for discovery.
Bereft of feelings,
sins not yet atoned
seeking closure
for transient memories not yet known.
She stares, transfixed
estranged images
coming in to focus
transient facade broken.
She remembers now.
Transience shattered,
glimpses of death
blood all around
steal clashes echoing
I couldn't save you.
Long departed love
from a time centuries ago
no way back,
transience please reclaim me.
Transience was a blessing,
I don't long to remember
your touch
so soothing and tender...
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All six parts of my 15 word challenge series :)
xxxLily
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Hey LILY!!......I didn't participate in the 15 word challenge....... don't really know what it was all about....... but I do know what I just read......a gorgeous sense of time passing washed over me as I read your carefully considered word choices...... creating phrasing most memorable......I thoroughly admire the soft touch you have with words......a very sensitive ability to convey......a sound softness....... and a lovely tone.......a pleasure to the ear...... and the minds eye........ALL STARS!!........ great read!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo ?✳✴☀