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Transience Part Three (15 Word Challenge)

Transience Part Three (15 Word Challenge)

          She stares, transfixed 

estranged images

          coming in to focus

transient facade broken.

          She remembers now. 

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Jason Brown

Not sure if this ever really presented a "challenge" to you, Lily.

This latest offering is elusive, enigmatic and brilliant!!

J x

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Lily Cas

I think it challenged me to find a different form of writing I might've never found otherwise. One that I enjoy immensely! 

I am glad you think so, I'm working on the fourth right now and there will be one final one after that in this little series :) 

xxxLily 

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Jason Brown

Excellent!
Writing a series, particularly of poetry, is a different kind of 'challenge'; it means you can expand on an idea which would usually have to be contained within one short work and explore all the different facets thereof. It gives you so much more room to spread your creative wings.

I can't wait to see yours at full stretch!!

J x

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Tony Taylor

HOLY CRAP!! :.....I didn't get in on the challenge......but if your others are this good......WOW!!.........great stuff LILY!!....... beautifully translucent!!......ALL STARS!!...... wow!......... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?✳✴☀

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Lily Cas

You still could! This is my part three you should go look at the other two!! Thank you, I've really enjoyed this alternate style of writing it's opened up a whole new room of creativity in my mind! I'm so glad you enjoyed :)

xxxLily 

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Richard Waters

You need to separate "into" in to "in" and "to" to make this 15 words Lily !  :)

Nice construct ! Good poetry.

All the best to you.  :)

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Lily Cas

Ah, a mistake I missed. Thank you for pointing that out! 

Thank you :)

xxxLily

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Mizzy ......

There is much depth to this Lily.....very intriguing. ...beautifully written .

Regards Mick.

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