I find now they just come to me in the blink of an eye! I was trying to sleep when the first line of this came to mind and now I am wide awake. It's fascinating. I'm using words I wouldn't normally use as well. I managed to add a tad of my rhyming into this one though. I am delighted you think so!
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Another triumph, Lily!
You seem to have found a form which very much suits your talents.
Exquisite!!
J ;)
I find now they just come to me in the blink of an eye! I was trying to sleep when the first line of this came to mind and now I am wide awake. It's fascinating. I'm using words I wouldn't normally use as well. I managed to add a tad of my rhyming into this one though. I am delighted you think so!
Thank you!! :)
xxxLily
Very nicely written Lily.....Lovely rhythm and subtle rhyme.
Mick.
Thank you! I liked that I was able to sneak that little rhyme it. :)
xxxLily