~ TRANSLUCENCY ~
Awaken,
The third eye,
(Man's vestigial light organ)
And the universe will whisper
Her secrets...
Life does test the bravest
For there is true bravery in growing older
And an innocence
In the magic of generations passing
Seemingly
In the blink of an eye
The true privilege
Is in being alive itself
And recognizing the horizon's view
Looped
In translucent circles
Connecting the me and you
Of all existence
To the inert
As well as the volcanic
As the soul moves steadily forward
Creating worlds anew
With evolving DNA
No dates nor persons
No rituals or special standing
The spirit
Recognizing the brilliance
Of and in the light
That exists
Between all life forms....
Oh, sweet spirit
Awaken,
For the universe is calling
And I shall remove my earthly topcoat
Place it ever so gently
Across your shoulders
And your body
Of ever-evolving
Stars...
Tony Taylor
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Oh so cleaver are you.
Oh so enlightened two .
Oh you must know your third eye is tripping on acid and open as wide as it can get .
You are one of the bright stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐.
Love the poem immensely.
YAY!!!...Thank you LILIANA!!....what a 'way cool' comment.....Love it!!....and may your 'Third Eye" brighten the doorstep of the Universe my friend.....there's so much yet to comprehend!!......smiles and thanx dear poet sister!!......Glide On Love!!.....T xo : )
Brighten the doorstep of the universe ..
If that is possible I welcome all ,but please don't wipe your feet.
I prefer you all just the way you are , your perfect to me .
Forget your loathing and bask in the morning light .
wonderful write Tony! I admire your insight and ability!................................Jim
JIM!!....I thank you most kindly for those wonderful remarks!!.....you are a gem and blessing to all on Cosmo!!.....stay groovy brother!!.....Peace!....T xo
Hi Tony,
Your 'earthly topcoat' sits firmly
on my shoulders!
Great piece,
Love,
Terry & Anne.
xoxo :)
Big Smiles!!.....thanx tons TERRY & ANNE!!......so glad you liked this write....it's one of those that I continue to tweak as time goes by......hope all is well with you two!!......Lots of love......T xo
Hi dear brother 😊 I really love this one... So spiritual ... Well done....
Take care.. Hugs & kisses....
Silvylove 😘
Cool Beans!!....thanx SILVY!!....I'm always so happy to hear from you dear poet sister!!.....sending lots of Love!!......T xo
You know...I veer 100% between these comforting spiritual thoughts and your previous darker write Tony, what I get from your work is that you have and are still travelling the vast incomprehensible puzzle of existence...once it bites it never let's go I have found...it fills the brain to capacity and one either makes peace or explodes.....or writes...and you do so brilliantly x
YAY!!!....thank you Miss MARION!!....and you are so right in your assessment....I am indeed a "Seek and ye shall find" warrior....I mean what other subject matter has so much to offer!!??......even if you never find what you are looking for you still gain the kind of knowledge and experience that is TRULY golden....in every sense of the word.......what we both seem to be exploring is a part of a kind of spiritual awakening that is happening all over the world.....and whether or not we help push the envelope of understanding....we can still love ourselves for having attempted to understand what most call incomprehensible!!......smiles....sorry for rambling on girlfriend!!.....I get excited when I talk about this stuff!!.....stay groovy Marion....and thanx again!......out!!......T xo
So true Tony. Matrix like most merely go through the motions. Wondering not about what’s really going on.
JP
Amen to that JP!!.....Amen to that!!......thanx brother!!.......Later.....T xo
It would be nigh on impossible to leave this page without hitting each of the three deserving and necessary buttons above .. Indeed, the only reason I quit hitting them, was because the blister burst .. Without doubt, a compelling poem Master T and one I feel sure I shall re-visit time and time again .. All Good Things & a few rockets n stars thrown in, just for good measure ... Neville :)
Awaken! We try, we hope so. Fabulous, Tony.