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Tree Hunt

Tree Hunt

Up in the mountains
Where the strong winds blow,
Trees permanently bent
And cling on tight as they grow.
I went there a wanderin'
On a bonsai tree search
And found in surprise,
A white laced silver birch.
I teased the soil gently
From the crack in the rock,
Pulled off a boot
Put the tree in my sock.
I should have, but didn't
Thank nature, our sister,
And payed the price,
On my ankle, a blister.
So always remember
To act with respect,
Because nature can punish,
If it's her, you neglect.

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Tony Taylor

Hey BydOnz!!.....this is such a respectfully poetic write.... I've never read you before (my loss)..... great sense of timing in your metering...... but it's the uniqueness of the subject matter that really brought this home for me....ALL STARS..... well done ~ enjoyed this!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo
Ps. I can't figure out how to pronounce your pen name.... little help? ?

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Byd0nz

Hi Tony, thanks for reading and giving a very nice comment on this.

Well the pen name is promounced

by- don's, but gotta be different (lol)

So I used the zero for o and nz (New Zealand) Β for s.

Thanks again Tony and Cfeers.

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