Poem -
War Of E
It was bloody war Bullets, rockets ablaze Fires bursting From roofs I dodged a bullet That grazed It split my brother in two Dripped blood Pain ensued The devil had a field day On us On them On who? I can't remember The color of the sun Last I saw It was red Last I saw I was red Last I saw So were you
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Wow Onlooker!!..........this has a VERY dark undercurrent........and is delivered so masterfully........that I'm left with inspired applause to offer you here.........the title is Smokingly perfect!!...........the pic is too........but the tone.........the ambiance and flow you've achieved here .........is SOOO dam good brother........frighteningly good!!.. 7*s FAV ......wow!......the devil is in the numbers!!.........T xo
Thanks Tony, I apologize that I'm just now commenting on your comment lol, sometimes I just feel as though I should take time out of my day so I can really appreciate and respond to the feedback I get and not just casually do it on the fly, I'm glad you liked this one regardless of its dark intention, my master often says to me that I have 3 demons in my head to come to play at certain times and that I just let them roam, to this day I still search for that meaning or any meaning for that matter, but there is no doubt that the battlefield portrays a certain poetic romance like no other, at times beautiful at others dark and despicable, I care not for what bad impressions I leave because my writes are dark all I care is that you felt...something...a poetic concept in itself but u digress, thank you my poetic brother, your kindness knows no bounds, much love
CO