Poem -
Troubled
Caniving and cruel.. displeauserd and ruled.. always forsakened never taken.. displeased to believe in anything indeed.. picturing anew but flickering to undo.. crushing and brushing.. calling but falling.. seeing but fleeting.. beatings rewarded for retreating.. boldness wavered into coldness..
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Hey SAVANNAH!!...... this is INTENSE..... and VERY powerful......a dark burden conveyed here...,. brings a sadness to the ambiance....a strong write that could be even MORE powerful if you changed the formatting a bit (no offense~ just a suggestion).......ALL STARS!!.... truly compelling sweet poetess!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?☀✴✳♥
Thankyou for the comment tony I try to write in poetic formations but at times I struggle to..