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truest blood.

Oh fallen shining one,
morning star,
Of all suns,
You fool no one,
Fornicated within the kingdom
Paying with the minds of angels
Causing such an uproar
Seek now your wing's
fallen to the earthly floor
A lesson for
Your destructive power
Seeking now no godly hour
No kindness was dispel
Of horrific shadows
Caused your deepest fall
Frightened angels watch it all
Satan lovely you
Ciaos reign's in true
No repent
Nor relent
Time in heaven less spent
Your place on earth you rent
Forsaken now
from heavens door
if only time was innocent
Fraternity was of truest blood
My loving creation would not
Have fell
living eternity in heaven
Now living within hell
corruption your only dwell.

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Tony Taylor

Hey Nardine,  sorry haven't been around much last 24.........so glad I didn't miss this........very kool condescension in this..........I agree with C, it DOES sound like God's point of view..........actually made me chuckle second time through............well done sister girl..........smiles........T  xx

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Nardine Sanderson

It's okay tony, hope your well hon, I've been quite unwell, still fighting off a feverish virus, seems destructive head, body ears everything hurts, but you can't stop the mind cos the words just never leave me in peace, always something running around in here, but i wouldn't have it any other way, yeah it gave me a little giggle after posting it, i draw my inspiration for the morning air a sunshine, no idea where it all comes from or why, but often things annoy me continuum until written down somewhere, so i guess what ever flows upon the winds of mind, love to you little bro, nardine xoxo

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Nardine Sanderson

Leola, (sue) this write was not to stir you or cause you any harm, more so over the comment of your deleted write about love, was not placed to cause harm either, i have no idea why you of all people have blocked my msg, but your obviously angry at me for something in not aware of, would have been nice for you to tell me what i had done, before you just up and end our friendship

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Great write dear Poetess Nardine, My applause, My vote

Time in heaven less spent
Your place on earth you rent
Forsaken now
from heavens door
if only time was innocent
Fraternity was of truest blood
My loving creation would not
Have fell
living eternity in heaven
Now living within hell
corruption your only dwell.

Love, regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you dear friend sir Williamsji, much love and appreciation nardine xoxo

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