u have some good lics .................I like ur style..........play with ur lines a bit more........you've got the talent to drop the words where they need to be dropped....... ...............don't stop.......urs truly lonely soul
Thanks for the read! I will definitely take your advice and work on making the verses longer. I was just thinking about a certain someone at the time I wrote it. It only took me two minutes to do this one but better ones are coming.Ā
Amazing image and your poem. It shows your inner feelings, Sister Valerie. We are with your. Thant image is a nightmare, a skull in between the petals, Please do not think like that, Your words are so strong Valerie Lyn, A poetess revelations, My vote, My nomination
No signs of life ( Do not get depressed )
Dead inside ( This is a painful expression from you )
Scraping the wounds ( Amazing words of melancholy )
To feel a high ( So celestial, so powerful )
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u have some good lics .................I like ur style..........play with ur lines a bit more........you've got the talent to drop the words where they need to be dropped....... ...............don't stop.......urs truly lonely soul
Thanks for the read! I will definitely take your advice and work on making the verses longer. I was just thinking about a certain someone at the time I wrote it. It only took me two minutes to do this one but better ones are coming.Ā
Val ā„ļø
Valerie Lyn,
Amazing image and your poem. It shows your inner feelings, Sister Valerie. We are with your. Thant image is a nightmare, a skull in between the petals, Please do not think like that, Your words are so strong Valerie Lyn, A poetess revelations, My vote, My nomination
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you for your vote and nomination!Ā
I am so in awe of how you deciphered my writing in such a way that no one else would be able to.Ā
I even admire how your comments make me think about my own writing and the double meaning behind it.Ā
Thank you so much for your prayers! I really need them. Much appreciated :)
ā„ļø Always,
Your Little Sis
Little Sister Poetess Valerie,
My short on-spot poem from me
Love, Prayers,
Big Wills
Awesome BigWills! Love it! Thank you!!!
ā„ļø YLS
Amazing poem! Very well constructed....great work!
Hi Ava! Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely comment! I truly appreciate it!!!
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