Poem -
truth shall set you free
Another piece to the puzzle,
in place ,
All those lies,
Behind a fake face,
To shallow to admit it,
So it was my heart,
that did it,
Walking away,
Well so you say,
Total isolation if I'd stayed,
To weak to admit,
your love for another ,
Pushing me away,
I hope you choke,
On these words one day,
I didn't leave you,
I kicked you out within doubt ,
Tears for years I'd cried,
Not one did you see,
Or confide ,
My heart broken,
Fragile pride,
They say the truth,
shall set you free ,
I know now the love ,
that was there wasn't from you,
But me,
And once i let go ,
The truth i could see,
It wasn't you who cared,
It was always me.
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Another thought provoking and emotive write Nardine. I loved the opening
Those lines 'to shallow to admit it, so it was my heart that did it', Beautifully conveyed, and incredibly poignant. A great piece, you write with real grit from your heart Nardine. A strong write from a strong woman:)x
Dearest Rachel, i deeply appreciate your loving comments, today was indeed a puzzle piece i needed so desperately, bringing more closure to my mind, i know pieces of the past 12 year's still stay hidden, but today a rather large piece entered my life, bringing me back to high spirits, thank you again sweetheart, means more than you know, love to you Rach, nardine xoxo
Dear Nardine,
Good write, I love it, My applause, My vote
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you sir williamsji, much love and appreciation Nardine xoxo
Dear Nardine,
Your poetic talent graph is going upward and I am glad you are doing well. My applause, My love.
Regards
Thank you sir I'm ever so pleased to hear you say such kind and supportive comments, love to you nardine xoxo
Great write
Maddison
Thank you Madison xx love to you, nardine xoxo
Concluding lines ventilate the hidden dispute -
"The truth i could see,
It wasn't you who cared,
It was always me."
With regards,
Thank you kindly sweet ravindra, much love nardine xoxo
Nardine
A very hard hitting poem that is all too close to home..
What a release for you to be able to write such powerful lines ...
Well done hun...you delivered this piece with raw passion!
Dearest Carey thank you sweetheart means alot that this write is appreciated so much by all of you, the past heartache is poring out as if an earthquake has beckoned it to the surface, from the depths of my soul, i will keep releasing it freely without force upon its readiness, thank you again sweetheart, love to you, nardine xoxo
Dear Nardine,
I have decided to sit and read all your earlier poems, all are amazing
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
sir williamsji, of that i am delighted to hear, thank you ever so much, l deeply appreciate it, love and respect to you sir xoxo nardine xx
Dear Nardine,
You are the ONLY one to comment on my verses nowadays, love, thanks and much regards to you dear Poetess Nardine Sanderson.
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear sir williamsji, i am sure your writes are and always will be most appreciated, by all who read them, with love nardine xoxo