Poem -
Death tunnel - reverse poetry
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The dark tunnel
Not seeing
Feeling the inevitable way
Clouds gathering
Storm approaching
Lashing lightening
Thrashing thunder
Heart hit
By the light
Death on
A journey
A journey
On death
By the light
Heart hit
Thrashing thunder
Lashing lightening
Storm
approaching
Cloud gathering
Feeling the inevitable way
Not seeing
The dark tunnel
Death
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Comments
Interesting way to place this piece
thanks for sharing jai
Much love Deano xo
Reverse must be my
favourite gear Deano
:))
i just read about reverse
amateur poet learns
the way
thank you very much
Love Jai:))
It's pretty cool reading it either way :)
Is the meaning different or same
I can’t make up my mind
I’m just the writer! :))
thank you once again Deano
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It's much the same, I guess reading it backwards makes it feel slightly different
Yes not much difference
one could analyse it
but I’m too tired! :)))
thank you ?