Poem -
TwiNK, TWinKLe
I TwinKle alonE
iN vOids oF mY makiNg
RoarinG aNd rAging
WhOle worldS fuckinG sHaking
THey treMble
AnD hidE
WhiLSt ruNNing awaY...
BuT I heaR tHe sCuttLIng
AnD... choKe aLL thE Day
ANd Kill iT
AnD sMash iT
WitH venOm aNd moRe, Till
daRkneSs desceNds tO
DiM lighT oN deAd shorE
TwiNk, tWinklinG aloNe
IN voidS oF My makiNg
RoAring anD RaginG
WhOLe wORldS
FuCKing
SHakiNg
M P 6/6/21
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Hi Marion...I've pinned this. The angst comes through so well in these words and I know that you dont give two hoots whether it does or doesn't but I am just letting you know that it does. You twinkle brightly here on Cosmo so brightly you dazzle! Hugs 🤗 x
Yes, am feeling much angst these days and I do greatly appreciate you taking the time lovely lady...I really do ❤️
Have to agree with being me Marion. Yes your pain is evident but you are so skilful at laying out these emotions and troubles. I could feel the bitterness in this write. Something I can relate to. I wish I could make all the pain go away lovely. Wish I had a darn time machine. Go save the many I would
Hugs and love to you dear friend 💗
Right back at you Gwen 🤗🤗🤗🤗
Awwww keep on bloody twink twinkling ❤️🌹❤️
Appreciate your support Jill, hugs 💕
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Amen to the above comments......Such powerful words you weave.....such anger and resentment you leave in your wake.....and I pray that it is helping to free you up from the fine mist of your grieving....and into the waiting arms (metaphorically) of those who obviously love and respect you so much here on COSMO!!.....ALWAYS a pleasure to read your words dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Hi Tony, I think now parents who.have lost children never heal...it opened a Pandora's box of questions and horror for me, never encountered previously in my life. As there are no answers to the the questions and no medication for the madness...healing can never take place, for me anyway. I admire those who have blind faith, envy them in fact but something as traumatic as burying a son can often obliterate any faith that may have existed and leave in its place an overriding sense of betrayal. This is something I will never be able to make peace with. A parent should never have to bury their child...but they do...every hour of every day...which leads one to question the whole concept of faith and gods. And if there are no god's what or who in fact, is in charge...kindness or cruelty or oblivion? Kindness would not cause suffering, oblivion means never knowing them again and cruelty ...well, that's terrifying. I can find no comfort in any of these options.
Anyway,...I ramble...thankyou so much for you extremely generous comment, and I apologise, my mind is a whirlwind of madness. Hugs my friend 💕
Hi Marion. Tina and Gwen have said it. So powerfully laid out this piece and I feel those emotions loud and clear 🙏🏽I am still here reading when I can. Px much love 💜💜💜
Aw...lovely to hear from you P...I'm glad you are still around, missing your amazing writes love...thankyou...hugs 💕
Tell it like it is, no point sugar coating. love this approach.
Thankyou x