Poem -
twisted dream.
Lost in a nightmare
In waking light
Somewhere between
The beginning of night
Twisted dreams
Winding streams
Fields of flowers
echoing scream's
Willing my mind
To wake
Bridge crumbling
Final fate
Time behind
Years ahead
something
missing
late
Hours dissimulate
What is real
Ending wheel
turning backwards
run
Covering clouds
Empty space
no earthly sun
Trapped within
A twisted dream
No one to hear
The final scream.
Nardine Sanderson 07/11/2014.
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Comments
Loved the rhythm, emanating from this poem Li Sis. Every line, every turn and bend, you poured pure rhyme and rhythm in them.."Twisted dreams"and "No one to hear the final scream."We hear you Lil Sis and always will...".Loved this entire poem"....poured your heart out in this one....Jim
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Thank you my brother Jim, if i ever get stuck in such reach in and pull me out, it's not somewhere i wish to stay, love you heaps always your sis down under nardine xoxo
You are always welcome and you know i will Lil Sis, you know i will, without a shadow of a doubt ........Again loved this one and powerful delivery, in your rhythmic flow...Jim
The rhythm is outstanding.