Poem -
twisted heart.
I wish i could rip it out of me,
hold it in my hand,
wave it around in front of you, maybe then you'd Understand,
The oozing pain ,
tormenting battle it's fought,
The shard's of glass within it, bleeding out across the ground,
Violent screams,
piecing sounds,
destruction,
Beating in a frantic, ruthless rhythm,
constantly growing new veins, spilling blood stained love with such force,
pressure building, burning, demanding an ending,
longing for closure,
bleeding, begging,
bleeding state, unconscious fate, unable to escape,
The twisted hate of its past love.
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Comments
Woww..Very well written ..I loved every single line which is really true in every aspect..I can relate this..:)
*5 from me..and a wonderful addition to my fav gallary..:)
Love
Surabhi
thank you so much Surabhi Saxena, im so glad you can relate, and happy to hear the add to favorites :) much love xx
Poetess nardine,
Need of being firm in decision, beautiful lines are echoing throughout the poem -
"constantly growing new veins, spilling blood stained
love with such force
pressure building, burning, demanding an ending,
longing for closer,..."
Love and Regards,
Ravindra Kumar
thank you ~~Ravindra Kumar , very pleased to hear you liked this xx much love Nardine
the heart is a universe of love, heartache and second to second dimensions. sometimes others fail to appreciate the sacredness of love. this poem speaks on many levels. but mainly, it speaks of being unappreciated, despite loving wholeheartedly.
Great Poem!
Thank you for your point of view Glenn,i appreciate your feelings :) much love xx
nardine sanderson,
Good write, I love the below lines. My nomination
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Sir WILLIAMSJI MAVELI, thank you so much, :) xx