Poem -
Two Harbours
Two Harbours
Three cities
Two harbours
A single promise
Broken ..
Broken neath
An uninterrupted
Blue
Maltese sky
Valletta
Has not changed
At all
My love ..
I swear she
Is the very same
As when you
Last left her
Cool as her
Many cobbled streets
More favoured than
Two harbours kissing
A true romance
Holidayed
Yet still aching
A mere finger tip apart ..
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Comments
Again...hauntingly beautiful and sad Neville...pinned x
I've got to stop saying bless you .. they'll all think one of us has got a cold or summat .. but other than thank you loads, I'm lost for words that are sufficiently meaningful and that also convey the depth of my appreciation Marion .. So fuck it .. bless you and thank ya loads too ................. Neville :) x
Hello NEVILLE!!.......Hauntingly beautiful is the perfect choice of words for this (thank you Marion).......the way you break your lines/phrases is truly elegant and adds to the overall tone......you are such a pleasure to read my friend!!.....ALL STARS & PINNED!!......Bravo dear poet brother!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Cor blimey guv'nor .. I really am gobsmacked by your heartwarming, positively encouraging & otherwise uplifting vote of confidence my friend ..
I really do appreciate the fact you took time out to consider this particular little scribble and the impact your visit has subsequently had on my confidence ............................................................. Neville :)
Love this!! You are on fire with your poetic verse at the moment Neville. This was fabulous poetry.
Thank you so much Max .. that sounds like music to these old ears of mine ........... Neville :)