Poem -
UBIQUITOUS (Pleiades Form)
Ultimately you are everywhere:
Under a rock or among trees,
Undulating in the flowing breeze
Ushering in strength to believe.
Uniquely, I hear your spirit speak
Unabridged, pure and without mystique
Ubiquitous power, Holy Mind…teach!
Selah: 1 John 2:27
(Pleiades Form: 7 lines, 6 syllables each, single word title, each line begins with same letter as the beginning letter in the title.)
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Hey Valerie!!..........Love this!!........I did a write with the same title a while back...........but the unceremonious and seemingly effortless delivery of beginning each line with the letter "U" makes this a VERY special write my friend............I love the way you write with such humility in your intent.........beautifully delivered Val!!............"lift a stone and HE is there..."...........gorgeous write..........smiles.............T xo
PS. is it Pleiades because of the "Seven Sisters"........the star clusters?.......T xo
Tony…Yes, you're correct! This poetic form seems to be a favorite venue of many contemporary poets. val xox
Tony! Thanks much for your wonderful commentary. I am forever learning with a desire to press ever deeper.
I enjoy using this form as it is short and can be used it to deliver a powerful "punch" on any subject.
val xox
Hi Val, Thanks for this, something borrowed - something new! I'll try this form out. Looking forward to exploring more of your work (play!)
Hi Steve! I am glad that you enjoyed this write. Yes, try the form it may be just the one that will express some thought or vision you have been mentally toying with. I hope you have an opportunity to enjoy some of my work. I explore many venues, i.e., spiritual, romance, erotic, madness, and paranormal. You will see many sonnet forms…my favorite.
val