Uncivil Obedience

I have ultimate free will
I can be the fisherman and his drifting boat;
the fishfood and the anchor;
the vast sea and the teeny hook
We can be an expanding net
I can be the shepherd and his guiding star;
the lamb and the crook;
the gate and the key
We can be a pilgrimage ritual
I choose to be dazzlingly visible,
yet impenetrabaly unseen
I can be the physician and his medicine;
the bed and the scalpel;
the labcoat and the microscope
We can be a healing hospice
I can be the father and his son;
the man and his god;
your friend and your brother
We can be a loving family
I choose to be great in judgment,
yet humble in mercy
I can be the author and his text;
a thought and a word;
the masterblueprint and the scaffold
We can be an award winning city
I can be the king and his priest;
the bread and the wine;
the temple and its cornerstone
We can be a sacred precinct
I choose to bless generously,
yet withhold my infinite riches
I can be the gardner and his vine;
a wild fire and an immovable rock;
the pitchfork and the fertiliser
We can be a nurturing greenhouse
I can be the rebel and the law;
the judgment and the pardon;
the fence and the welcoming threshhold
We can be a place of refuge
I choose to be the nightingale under the moon,
and the cock at dawn
I can be the master and his slave;
the lamp and its oil;
the money and the gift
We can be a happening party
I can be the prophet and his miracle staff;
the quietest babe and the largest planet;
a cosmic artist and a neon tattoo
I choose to hate sin,
yet...
I choose to love you
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You're right!!...I did enjoy this write.....especially the way it related to the title itself......you have some VERY unique phrasing within this piece.....my favorite is ~
~ " I can be...
A cosmic artist and a neon tattoo.."
I Love the imagery that this one line conjures in the minds eye!!….You have written excellent stuff today.....and to have done so well in one day is a blessing brother!!……..you're a lightning rod this day!!…..smiles.....T xo : )
I liked how you alternated between points of view throughout the poem. It was an interesting read -- well done!
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The compare and contrast element within the poem worked well. I like to think of a creative writer as a master of their craft - a painter with keys to press in lou of a paintbrush. I think you have a unique poem here.