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Uncivil Obedience

I have ultimate free will

I can be the fisherman and his drifting boat;
the fishfood and the anchor;
the vast sea and the teeny hook

We can be an expanding net

I can be the shepherd and his guiding star;
the lamb and the crook;
the gate and the key

We can be a pilgrimage ritual

I choose to be dazzlingly visible,
yet impenetrabaly unseen

I can be the physician and his medicine;
the bed and the scalpel;
the labcoat and the microscope

We can be a healing hospice

I can be the father and his son;
the man and his god;
your friend and your brother

We can be a loving family

I choose to be great in judgment,
yet humble in mercy

I can be the author and his text;
a thought and a word;
the masterblueprint and the scaffold

We can be an award winning city

I can be the king and his priest;
the bread and the wine;
the temple and its cornerstone

We can be a sacred precinct

I choose to bless generously,
yet withhold my infinite riches

I can be the gardner and his vine;
a wild fire and an immovable rock;
the pitchfork and the fertiliser

We can be a nurturing greenhouse

I can be the rebel and the law;
the judgment and the pardon;
the fence and the welcoming threshhold

We can be a place of refuge

I choose to be the nightingale under the moon,
and the cock at dawn

I can be the master and his slave;
the lamp and its oil;
the money and the gift

We can be a happening party

I can be the prophet and his miracle staff;
the quietest babe and the largest planet;
a cosmic artist and a neon tattoo

I choose to hate sin,

yet...

I choose to love you

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Tony Taylor

You're right!!...I did enjoy this write.....especially the way it related to the title itself......you have some VERY unique phrasing within this piece.....my favorite is ~

                         ~ " I can be...
                              A cosmic artist and a neon tattoo.."

I Love the imagery that this one line conjures in the minds eye!!….You have written excellent stuff today.....and to have done so well in one day is a blessing brother!!……..you're a lightning rod this day!!…..smiles.....T xo : )

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Katina Woodruff...

I liked how you alternated between points of view throughout the poem. It was an interesting read -- well done! 

Favorite part 

I can be the author and his text;
a thought and a word;
the masterblueprint and the scaffold

The compare and contrast element within the poem worked well. I like to think of a creative writer as a master of their craft - a painter with keys to press in lou of a paintbrush. I think you have a unique poem here. 

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