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"UNCLAD"

"UNCLAD"

An estranged soul in this mottled world .

In pristine quest for concealed axiom.

Truancy of an effigy crumbling  soul.

Petite realm shaken in timid apprehensions.

Isolated amid the purple clan whirling for sweet acrid.

Severed the cords of bondage in this bargain .

Desolate in the compromised  league of modesty.

Dissolved chains of  feral subjection's in free reins.

Resonated beyond the symmetry of worship in devotion.

Uncloaked the frame layer by layer ignoring the seasons .

Stood naked facing the decayed thoughts of dishonor.

Flourishing attentions of invincible belief of asceticism.

Embracing the unique antiquated reality of rawness.

Perusing the lonesome course,revived in deep reflections.

Admiring the primitive image,unshaken by sarcasms .

Walked unclad in cosmic bliss rejecting all telluric codes .

BY

PIUSHA

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piusha singh

Hi friends ,this poem is inspired by a female mystic,named Mahadevi(birth name) but Known as Akka mahadevi , lived in Karnataka ,a state,India in 12th century BC.She is the most influential woman and human being in my life .Usually i tend to get inspired by anything on earth .She is a great feminist worked for the welfare of women , for women empowerment and enlightenment.She is a household name in karnataka .She married to a King Kaushika by arrangement but never stayed in married life as she considered Lord Shiva as her husband and rejected mortal love in favor of eternity.She rejected her luxurious life renouncing even her clothes.She wandered naked in streets as a poet saint singing praises of Lord Shiva.She made animals her friends and companions.Eventually wandering in the forests ,penance in a cave near Srisilam in Andhra Pradesh another state in India .I visited that cave in 2010 ,It took three days on wheels to reach and 1 hour on a boat to reach near that cave now.Imagine 12th centuary BC,a naked woman travelling that far by foot,her courage,devotion and love is not from this world.It's said that she unified in eternal grace .

For me ,her courage to renounce her clothes during 12 th century BC made me to think regarding her for years.I came to know regarding her in 1998 since then she is and will be my idol. I am learning every second something new from someone.And feel blessed to talk about the bravery by my dear Akkamahadevi for her passion.

Let me write her few cosmic verses of devotion (translated version for you to read)

"When all the world is the eye of the lord,

onlooking everywhere,what can you cover and conceal?"

Thnxxx for your patience ...

Love and light to all my dear friends..

PIUSHA....

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Glenn Marchand

I thank you for giving the reader a bit of history on the motivation of this poem. This indeed has to be read through a spiritual filter, if one is to take something from it. You have done your mystic friend a great justice. The poem turns the mind, pulling it, even stretching its perception. Every line is a new dimension within itself. All in all, this is a great poem.

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piusha singh

Dear Glenn my deep gratitude for your patience to read my work.I felt it would be better if I give little bit about the inspiration for my write as it will make the read easier.Thnxxx a million for your kind support.

Love
Piusha

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Piusha Singh,

When all the world is the eye of the lord,

onlooking everywhere,what can you cover and conceal?"

Great poetical, DEVOTIONAL expressions based on " Akkamahadevi " for her passion .  I love to read the below lines

My applause, My nomination for your  "UNCLAD"

  • Stood naked facing the decayed thoughts of dishonor.
  • Flourishing attentions of invincible belief of asceticism.
  • Embracing the unique antiquated reality of rawness.
  • Perusing the lonesome course,revived in deep reflections.
  • Admiring the primitive image,unshaken by sarcasms .
  • Walked unclad in cosmic bliss rejecting all telluric codes .

WILLY

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piusha singh

Thnxxx - William, she is my strength and I draw lot of inspiration listening her passionate lines towards almighty.And my deep gratitude towards your kind support and nomination.
Love and light
Piusha

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Ravindra Kumar

Didactic piece of work that exhibits us courage, passion and strong will of lady Akka mahadevi alike one another woman named 'Meera'.

Ravindra Kumar 

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piusha singh

Exactly but meera was born in 1498 AD..and meera is influential to me as well but the courage to renounce everything including her clothes, walking naked through the streets I think that I can't even imagine.This world will be peaceful when a woman can walk unclassified through the street casually..not as a sex symbol or not as a part of procession or challenge..
Thnxxx-for your kind review Ravindra- jigsaw
Cheers
Piusha

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piusha singh

My apologies Ravindra ji ..For that unwanted jigsaw ...I am embarrassed many times..I respect and value your remarks a lot..Hope you will understand. .It was unintentional...
Love
Piusha

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piusha singh

Don't know , I know her as I lived in Karat aka for 10 years. But she is their in Wikipedia ..I need to search and let you know....she has written only few poems in kannada and I think you may get it online.I listen to her 5 kannada songs online which I will be out of this world when I hear those verses.Probably not for others...but for me she is a guide...
love
Piusha

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Ravindra Kumar

Quite appropriate,...Piusha Jee ! I agree with you. Kindly note, when a soul drinks joy of spirituality he/she never care about his/her form of appearance that may be clad or unclad. Mere his/her devotion becomes the cause of a linking plug. Although base of my comparison between Akka  mahadevi and Meera was not exactly match with cover and title of your poem, certainly it revolves around nature of their wide understanding scope. Thank you.  

Ravindra Kumar

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piusha singh

I totally agree with what you said regarding spirituality.....no one is small or big in here ..For me both females were influential ..I listen to me era's bhajans frequently as well.d expend upon the mental status..but akka inspired me to write this poem...

Love
Piusha

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piusha singh

It's not expend...please read it as depend...and thnxxx- a million for your kind remarks

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