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CLARA (Dblankportrait's Brevity Challenge)

CLARA (Dblankportrait's Brevity Challenge)

One step forward or I just lay down and forget about it...

If I remain in it fight I must...

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GREG TUCKER

As always your talent is very apparent!  Great write

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Here we are , you sitting beside me thinking you're just slightly poking me in the rib with a blushing smile, truth being you've got me on my knees with my head in a vice😯😂😂😂😂

This is intensely thought provoking to me, you are the queen of wit's on here my dear friend🌾👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🚬☕✍

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

Thank you very much!

A challenge indeed!

Hugs...

Feathers

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sparrowsong

Hello Dblankportrait...

☺ 👉 😌 😂

Yeah!!

Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for your sweet and kind comment my friend!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Lauren Dorf

Well done, sparrowsong!

Hugs xx
Lauren🌺

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Tina

Yay!!!  Excellent, Sparrowsong 

Tina x

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sparrowsong

Hello Lauren...

Thank you very much!

I will comment on yours I read it...

It was awesome!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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Charu Shawd

Super Powerful piece 👏👏👏👏👏

It echoes relentlessly on the fact how we always have two options.
And the only option to tread on d road not taken is “to fight”
 Bitter truth it is  indeed !!!
nailed how its exprssed !
💕🕊

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sparrowsong

Hello Tina...

Thank you very much!

Glad you enjoyed!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Charu...

Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Kathleen...

Glad you enjoyed!

🐣

Thank you very much for your sweet comment and support my friend!

Hugs...

Tweety

 

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sparrowsong

?? Lorris...

Nonsense is a compliment right?

Thank you very much for reading...

​​​​​​Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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Greg Etsell

I may get in this and you may just help me understand what to do

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