Poem -
Underneath
Under the death of me
Within my very grief
Persuade me to believe
That youâre here to relief
To unleash the reef
That every soul conceives
Everyday still proceeds
The days go on and on
You see
Those things arenât always received
So please donât release
These things that still proceed
Underneath
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Hey CHLOE!!......VERY compelling rhyme scheme...... keeping your reader involved with the enigmatic nature implied........ and the long "E" sound for continuity....... clever......ALL STARS!!........ well done ......and ......WELCOME to COSMO!!........T xo. ?âłâ´â
Thank you so much!Â
Nice rythm, i like
Thank you!
I enjoyed this, these things do proceed underneath, well done xxÂ
Aw, thank you!