Ungrateful As We Are.

The sky is bright, clouds are moving
They seem to be-moving in haste.
Men are falling asleep
Yet their hearts
Are raised with pride
In their chests.
Their souls are lazing
Above the moon glory
Whilst they glitter
Like a morning star.
They seem not to care
Whether their dreams came to them-
Or if they went to them
Mourning is forbidden
For they need it not.
But if they could share
What they smiled at.
They would love to-
Share the moment when,
Their souls had risen
Up from their bodies,
For then, they had seen-
The real essence of their existence.
But now they shall say;
Take us out!
For we have no business here!
The dreams had ended sharply
What else could be left?
With faces turned out
Like a dying coal, they breathe
And smile, even without a thank you
They laugh, because-
They still have a second chance.
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Comments
Very good and deep, thanks for sharing!
Thank you too Gordon.I am happy you liked it :)
sad but very beautiful piece ! such a way with your words Fayeampah keep writing !! tina x
Thank you Tina.
great write x
Thank you so much Susan
love the word choice in this poem :)
Thank you Elisa, I am happy you love it :)
this feels quite a deep write with a
message which I enjoyed reading;
some nice imagery
"like a dying coal, they breathe..."
best wishes Jai :)
Thank you Jai :)