Unhampered Hearts Of The Ocean
Thundering waves,
Galloping ghosts
The eyes blink a thousand times
While watching the coast;
The most mesmerizing spectacle
Witnessed visually,
Onto Mustangs beach
They rode out of the sea.
Wild~free, you would swear
Horses materializing from the swell
No, those chargers
Were giving the ocean hell,
Roaming thee unknown
Never mounted, valiant but not steeds
No man can tame
Such a desirable breed.
Striding sands
Looking for washed up treasures of the deep,
Their eyes of pearl sparkle
As sun sets to bed, from watery blankets peeks.
Drawing closer hoping for better belief,
Moonlight for them holds no surprise
Whence came unfurling out of waves
Conclusion by my sight, simply they vaporized.
As recycling rain, storm clouds commotion,
Wave running unhampered hearts of the ocean.
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Hey Devon this reminds me so much of the horses on the outer banks of nc. They have been roaming free for centuries. A very creative write .I cherie will love this one alot . My respect to you on a great write . Can't get much better than the beach and horses and of course your woman by your side ,rock
Hey Rock, I came across this picture the other day and thought of Cherie. So I decided to write something inspired by the way you and her do writes, just getting ideas and inspiration from a pretty cool picture. I can't wait to hear from her lol. I wanted to post this yesterday but iam sunburned and softballed out after this weekend and last couple of days with my daughters playing. Much love and respect to you HRL. Peace.
Hey Devon you did a great job with the picture and wording . Cherie will love it just like I did . My love and respect to you . Rock
Thanks again Rock.
Yea !!!!!!
August what's up man? I will be checking out your work soon, I definitely need some good inspiration. Peace.
I have a painting of this here from when I was younger
From an art foundation of artists who use their mouths
Or feet to paint, always a favorite of mine ❤
I saw this and instantly thought of Cherie and her affinity for horses. Hearing how much you appreciate the art you know you just can't pass up on a cool piece, which is visually stunning and was such a fun pleasure to come up with this write. Thanks Nardine for reading much love to you.
It is beautiful, lovely imagery throughout the whole story. I can say that this is the most sweet poem I have read lately. You are very talented and always know how to choose your lines. WELL DONE!!!!Love it, enjoyed it.
All the best Goldie
Thank you so much Goldie, and that is very nice to hear that it means a lot. My best in return.
You are most welcome Devon :)