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Unkempt

Unkempt

Your fingers curling in my hair

knew I should have shaved there

you asked me had I got a brush

knew I wasn’t getting your tongues touch

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Jimmy Arnold

Very cute poem Susan,delivered not with an intrusion of a mouth full...Good job.

Jim

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Susan O'Reilly

Hi Jim thanks and I appreciate your humourous response all the best Susan x

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Jimmy Arnold

like always, great poem Susan..Just played off this line, real good taste in your humorous delivery..."(Good humor and with no disrespect) " knew I wasn't getting your tongues touch" 

Jim

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Susan O'Reilly

Hi Jim I never asked do you prefer to be called Jim or Jimmy I don't mind Sue or Susan just curious x

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Jimmy Arnold

Which ever Susan no real preference and just as William stated good humor, awakes the day in all of us.....Jim

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Susan O'Reilly

Hi Williams glad you enjoyed and yes I never specifically mention anything here so its all in the delivery and readers mind lol glad you enjoyed thanks x

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