Poem -

unrecognizable soul

I am the shadows that fall with the night,
I am the sun that brings morning light,
I am the soul of a newborn baby,
I am the strength in the hand of an old lady,
I am the strong chime of a Church bell,
I am a witch that cast a spell,
I am all but myself,
For i don't know who i am, or what i should do,
This is all because of you,
You took away the person i once knew,
And replaced her with an unrecognizable soul.

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Glenn Marchand

this poem speaks to a deep division within the self. it also speaks to a person who knows that she is at a distance from herself.

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Nardine Sanderson

I wrote this in 1999, about the age of 16,i had previously lost my first love, to a hit and run, he died on impact, alot of confused feelings about life, and who i was without him., thank you Glen for your comments you describe them perfectly

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