Poem -

unsteady

unsteady

when my tears rest
like hail

and pale to my lips 

as your finger touches unsteady...

and the sound of grasshoppers
at play
as  to a chant in a field
of the wise of gifts

when your hands smooth
to your hands
in a gentle path so guided
upon my balled skull  unworthy to every touch

then and then... your
emptiness there will be
as to the  heart
a silence 
my Love...

to unsteady a life becomes

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Tony Taylor

Wow!! Sir LORRIS!!....it's the word choices that jump out for me here......you have a gift for the pairing of words to mean something that wasn't there before....and a fine sense of the poetic......ALL STARS!!....enjoyed this ny friend!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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